Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Blog # 16: msb comments, ideas, and plans

From Vaughn's blog (http://vaughnhumanityblog.blogspot.com) I thought she had a good way of looking at things. I had been thinking about how the animals cause the pollution, but i didn't think about how pollution affects the animals. I really like the question she asked. Im going to think more on how the animaps are affected. Or i'll focus on which animals are greatly affected or whatever. Something close to that.

From Madison's blog (http://mmhuman.blogspot.com/2009/10/how-common-is-it-for-people-to-get.html) i noticed she used lots of personal evidence. She made her question relevant and tied her story back to home. She had charts and statistics. She used pictures and she made he story more interesring because she showedthat it could affect me too. (that sounds really selfish but i didnt mean it like that). I wanna pick a story or a topic to write about that would be more personal and have more impact on the people reading it


From Calvins blog (http://calvinbrownhthma.blogspot.com/2009/10/15-msb-products.html) i learned a different poont of view on "how" to do the final project. Instead of just a simple photo essay Calvin plans on doing a photojournalist type thing. That's really cool and creative. So i plan on being more creative in whatever final product i decide to do. Make it more "mariyah-ish" i quess. Put my own spunk in it.

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